I'd say maybe work on the wording a tiny bit, every once in while there's a tiny flub up with the wording but it's not bad enough to not make it ledgable, I gets whut you're saying, and the no one reading thing I can assume because of not being well known, like in groups ima in I get comments on how cute my stuff looks but at the end of the day don't get alot of traffic as well, I say just keep writing and sooner or later you'll see an increase in attention then